unit 3 writting quiz

Luis Euyoqui
the writying corner

my story is kind a success and adventure at the same time. my story begins when i was 12 i played football it was my 6th season of 15 season. so i was in the defense lineman, durond that season we won some games and we lost many games too but fewer. we won against halcones of mexicali, yuma, el centro, brawley and san diego. my team it was awesome just we are 19 players and the other teams has 30 player minimum. in the final game in the chanpionship we won against brawley in home so it was mexicali in cetys, we won in overtime with a risky game, everyone was nervous, at the last secon we made a touchdown and and won it the game. so during the season so many teams invite us to play against them. we travel to long beach which that game it was to hard to win it, in las vegas nevada, temecula, murieta and indio california and we won the games just the long beach. a team from hawaii which are the champs of the island kauaii  invite us to play against them, so we travel to kauaii,  all the team went and it was a hard game we won for just one point (7-6) and we met places over there like beaches, parts when they filming a movie, caves when japansese hide during the ww2 we met a lot places. so thats my story of a success and adventure of my life